Qiao Qiao is the most recognized student in Tianma Primary School, but he is also the one with the lowest composition score.
The teacher doesn’t like Qiao Qiao’s composition very much. The reason is simple: digression. Qiao Qiao’s associative ability is too developed.At the moment when he first wrote, Qiao Qiao was able to write according to the theme arranged by the teacher, but within three lines, he began to play freely.When the grid on the paper was full, Qiao Qiao I haven’t reentered the question yet. How can such a composition get a high score?
Teacher has criticized Qiao Qiao more than once. The teacher said: “Qiao Qiao, you can’t go on like this, you can obviously get a higher score.” Qiao Qiao said: “Teacher, as soon as I write something, I can’t help but think about it. The more you get, the farther you are from the question.”
“So, the next time you start to leave the question, you will immediately cross out the sentence from the question and write it again according to the original idea!” The teacher taught.
This day is the midterm exam. When he got the Chinese language paper, Qiao Qiao first glanced at the composition and asked to write an 800-word essay on the topic of “the most memorable thing”.
“One of the most memorable things” is a type of composition that Qiao Qiao did not know how many times he has written, from proficiency to disgust. Qiao Qiao couldn’t help laughing.
When he started writing, Qiaoqiao habitually wrote a very traditional beginning: “The wind and the sun are beautiful, the sun shines. Early in the morning, I carried my schoolbag to school, and the little bird on the branch was smiling at me “
wrote here, an inspiration appeared in Qiao Qiao’s mind, so he began to describe the bird further: “The bird has two, one black, one white, the black like crow, white like It’s a dove of peace.”
After writing this sentence, Qiao Qiao felt blood boiling, and an interesting idea began to brew in his mind. Qiao Qiao wanted to write a story: the reason why every day will be black is because Countless black birds raised their wings and flew up to the sky, so that the sky was black, and the reason why the sky shines every day is because there are countless white pigeons flying up to the sky and polished the sky…
Just thinking about this, Qiao Qiao was so excited that he couldn’t make himself. When he reacted, the two composition papers were full, and he just wrote that the protagonist had the first conversation with the two birds!
“Qiao Qiao, how’s it going?” The teacher was standing behind Qiao Qiao some time, “Remember to hold on to the central idea, never digress, and ask you to write the most memorable thing.”< br> There was a sweat on the back of Qiao Qiao. Qiao Qiao knew better than anyone that what he was writing now was very different from the teacher’s request.
But after the teacher left, Qiao Qiao couldn’t help writing the story just now. The composition paper was gone. He wrote on the back of the test paper. The more he wrote, the happier he was, and the farther he was from the title. For example, after Qiao Qiao wrote a grass on the side of the road, he naturally started to write flowers, after writing flowers and trees, after writing trees, he wrote fruits, after he wrote fruits, he wrote fruit vendors, and then hawkers. Family, friends of family, friends are interested in playing football, YuIt was Beckham who started to write, and the stage of the story gradually rushed out of Asia and into the world…
is getting farther and farther and farther away. Qiao Qiao feels that he is running like a horse, and the imagination of all directions connects things that are not related. The content is becoming more and more complicated, and the plot is more and more ups and downs…
When the bell at the end of the exam rang, Qiao Qiao wrote five thousand words.
The teacher called the paper on the podium, Qiao Qiao panicked, not because of his composition, but because the back of the test paper was full of text, he was reluctant to turn it in!
“Qiao Qiao, pass the paper up.” Teacher Cried above.
Qiao Qiao reluctantly followed suit.
After two classes, Qiao Qiao was really called to the office by the teacher.
“You tell me, what is this you wrote?” The teacher took Qiao Qiao’s test paper and shook his hands.
Qiao Qiao is speechless.
“I have never seen the digression even worse! This, this is simply ridiculous! The digression is thousands of miles!” The teacher was anxiously corrupted.
“I’m sorry…” Qiao Qiao spoke at this moment.
“The apology won’t get a high score.” The teacher concealed his face.
“No, I mean…” Qiao Qiao said, “If you can, can you please return me the test paper? … It doesn’t matter what the score is.”